Blog #7 - Thesis Statement/Body Paragraph Revisions

Please submit an entry by Wednesday 10/31/07 11:59pm!

Please respond to the following questions. In your response be sure to number your response according to the prompts.

1. Re-write your thesis statement. If you feel like your thesis statement is strong enough, then explain why you feel that way in 5-7 sentences.

2. How will you plan on revising your body paragraphs? What steps do you need to take in order to revise your body paragraphs? How much time do you anticipate this will take?

Human Nature Paper Benchmark #1

Due for All Blocks – Thursday 10/4/07 (Friday is the Picnic!)

Please respond with the following:

1) Your Essential Question

2) Your Thesis Statement